tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post899696879670838677..comments2023-03-28T02:05:19.175-07:00Comments on Fallen Castle: The RainFallen Castlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15192301256895903329noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-34324244943120516772010-10-07T18:49:53.077-07:002010-10-07T18:49:53.077-07:00the spirit of mankind does awake in the black
...s...the spirit of mankind does awake in the black<br />...such a lovely line that I don't understand<br />but am seeking too<br />thank you for such lines of poetry<br />and thank you for visiting my blogSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-27100136379547609842010-10-01T20:27:59.399-07:002010-10-01T20:27:59.399-07:00Very well done...I enjoyed reading it... it slowly...Very well done...I enjoyed reading it... it slowly grows up on you... just like as you said in the last line..."Rain fall slowly like dream" <br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya <br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay <br />Blog:http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-55310158112408778952010-10-01T11:42:35.603-07:002010-10-01T11:42:35.603-07:00The flowing words that deliver vivid images give m...The flowing words that deliver vivid images give me a sense of peace and harmony inside the constant rain and flux of Autumn. Thanks for sharing your creativity.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-43997668590869252262010-10-01T07:28:15.961-07:002010-10-01T07:28:15.961-07:00Great imagery and and intense description. Well d...Great imagery and and intense description. Well done!<br />Coffee Table Poetry<br />http://coffeetablepoetry.comVic Mahfoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453845776018417876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-84486126562535642512010-09-30T23:52:10.797-07:002010-09-30T23:52:10.797-07:00nicely done.nicely done.alex-nesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17870388649464548377noreply@blogger.com