tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.comments2023-03-28T02:05:19.175-07:00Fallen CastleFallen Castlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15192301256895903329noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-31116563840389491552011-11-28T05:15:41.874-08:002011-11-28T05:15:41.874-08:00it's beautiful.:)it's beautiful.:)The Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01162856978395271960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-35379002439331351912011-09-25T07:50:07.804-07:002011-09-25T07:50:07.804-07:00thank you.it is a piece that i used to describe th...thank you.it is a piece that i used to describe the nature of chaos and the standing of the mind in a moment of true helplessness.it is always wise to wait out the storm,but survival demands a destiny of its own when faced by harsh and hostile environments.im glad you enjoyed it...Fallen Castlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15192301256895903329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-84676425937528871202011-09-24T04:11:30.646-07:002011-09-24T04:11:30.646-07:00An intense poem with vivid descriptions and detail...An intense poem with vivid descriptions and details. Well written.Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-40145803062524577852011-06-28T09:36:07.108-07:002011-06-28T09:36:07.108-07:00I like the writing style, good imagery...depth. I ...I like the writing style, good imagery...depth. I must admit not sure where you were going with the theme but the poem reads well. As with most poetry, I am thinking interpretation can be left to the reader. What it conjures up in my imagination, perhaps due to personal experience, is family abuse...an abusive father and husband. Curious to know what was in your mind when creating the poem.Dorianna Ric (paintswithwords)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14784903538135226600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-77509288699717056732011-04-11T23:58:12.885-07:002011-04-11T23:58:12.885-07:00Wow, there is a lot of wisdom about finding one...Wow, there is a lot of wisdom about finding one's self in this poem. I love these two lines "are you a man who has not seen his face?<br />are you so modest that your beauty sinks beneath your skin?" Absolutely exquisite, it really makes me not want to hold back in life & live to the fullest. Thank you for sharing this. =))Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-16939364552097032702011-04-09T07:20:43.179-07:002011-04-09T07:20:43.179-07:00Admitted virtue and arrogance in equal terms. I li...Admitted virtue and arrogance in equal terms. I like that, though both light and mirrors, especially in tandem create illusory glimpses of physical reality that are difficult to comprehend through basic equations. Perhaps the answer is the search. Thought-provoking poem.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-72337955621820575312011-02-19T22:12:05.522-08:002011-02-19T22:12:05.522-08:00deep inner explorationdeep inner explorationTHINKOPOTAMUShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01296033681698372256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-65809468665848250202011-01-11T03:31:15.069-08:002011-01-11T03:31:15.069-08:00You set the stage of emotions from your first few ...You set the stage of emotions from your first few lines and each moment thereafter build in depth. I envision a lone man on a dark stage, spotlighted in a grey/yellowish hue, with a darkled city slums behind him. A Shakespearean actor in command of the stage, throwing words filled with intensity, strength, softness and each filled with emotions into the crowd; each word thrown pushes them deeper into their seats with the sheer weight of the word spoken. This is a magnificent piece of work, and one which we all, in some manner can relate to. Thank you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05791591892742270029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-88515653660998465682011-01-10T19:39:51.245-08:002011-01-10T19:39:51.245-08:00Great depth overall and far reaching in parts. Act...Great depth overall and far reaching in parts. Actor or not you're right to emphasize the resistance, or deaf ears that seldom if ever listen halfheartedly. Can relate directly to many parts of the piece.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-86163098216292367452010-12-19T03:03:22.517-08:002010-12-19T03:03:22.517-08:00I am extremely visual and enjoy how you arrange yo...I am extremely visual and enjoy how you arrange your words/phrases to paint a picture in my mind. Thank you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05791591892742270029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-346863849655225342010-11-07T02:48:27.326-08:002010-11-07T02:48:27.326-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Sruti MDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08568003694275176769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-72118539278339018412010-11-06T15:38:27.350-07:002010-11-06T15:38:27.350-07:00This reminds me of the classic Sufi poets like Rum...This reminds me of the classic Sufi poets like Rumi - beautiful poemAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-91060630789712996342010-11-06T14:00:17.068-07:002010-11-06T14:00:17.068-07:00Wow - what intensity; Thank you! Great work. Cheer...Wow - what intensity; Thank you! Great work. Cheers, DavidAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05791591892742270029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-77233325192917274662010-11-06T13:02:38.867-07:002010-11-06T13:02:38.867-07:00I like your poem very much. CheersI like your poem very much. Cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-64879976059667155802010-10-19T15:08:57.914-07:002010-10-19T15:08:57.914-07:00superb, great imagery :)superb, great imagery :)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-34324244943120516772010-10-07T18:49:53.077-07:002010-10-07T18:49:53.077-07:00the spirit of mankind does awake in the black
...s...the spirit of mankind does awake in the black<br />...such a lovely line that I don't understand<br />but am seeking too<br />thank you for such lines of poetry<br />and thank you for visiting my blogSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-56924879998073253582010-10-03T04:03:52.971-07:002010-10-03T04:03:52.971-07:00Vry well said and i enjoyed reading specially the ...Vry well said and i enjoyed reading specially the way you have taken characters out of the streets and given then life... thanks for sharing..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-27100136379547609842010-10-01T20:27:59.399-07:002010-10-01T20:27:59.399-07:00Very well done...I enjoyed reading it... it slowly...Very well done...I enjoyed reading it... it slowly grows up on you... just like as you said in the last line..."Rain fall slowly like dream" <br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya <br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay <br />Blog:http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-55310158112408778952010-10-01T11:42:35.603-07:002010-10-01T11:42:35.603-07:00The flowing words that deliver vivid images give m...The flowing words that deliver vivid images give me a sense of peace and harmony inside the constant rain and flux of Autumn. Thanks for sharing your creativity.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-43997668590869252262010-10-01T07:28:15.961-07:002010-10-01T07:28:15.961-07:00Great imagery and and intense description. Well d...Great imagery and and intense description. Well done!<br />Coffee Table Poetry<br />http://coffeetablepoetry.comVic Mahfoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00453845776018417876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-84486126562535642512010-09-30T23:52:10.797-07:002010-09-30T23:52:10.797-07:00nicely done.nicely done.alex-nesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17870388649464548377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-9131169188357052252010-09-23T21:10:11.074-07:002010-09-23T21:10:11.074-07:00"Tragedy and on its comic behalf..." - T..."Tragedy and on its comic behalf..." - That's life. Thanks for sharing so great thoughts.Patrícia Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01315425210792263136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-11824784944174044942010-09-23T10:35:12.709-07:002010-09-23T10:35:12.709-07:00Beautiful...thank-you very much for posting your b...Beautiful...thank-you very much for posting your beautiful work here...If you are inclined and interested, we are producing a book/dvd of Chris McCandless's photographs and writings. Feel free to write to me at heatherhort@gmail.com<br /><br />Most warmly,<br />HeatherAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12725645391900785597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-26931379593480037812010-09-22T14:35:21.497-07:002010-09-22T14:35:21.497-07:00very nice tribute poem..:)very nice tribute poem..:)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2200177349085781271.post-22200022829331384452010-09-22T14:34:12.725-07:002010-09-22T14:34:12.725-07:00To regain yourself in peace after what you describ...To regain yourself in peace after what you describe is admirable to me, and evokes sympathy for those who do not heal. Your poem is very moving and intense. cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com